Jack's shot wound

[Jack Noel]

I layed where ever I was, It was very comftarble, my stomach hurt and I could't move. there were shapes like people above me shouting and moving about, I couldn't speak, the bullet wounds hurt he had been shot by a Heckler and Koch PSG1, one of the most powerful sniper rifles in the world, he felt an increadible pain in his chest as he breathed. I tried to talk but pain seared through me as I managed a whimper, my view was black and white with red strains coming through.

[Kim Catz]

Kim was in tears, Jack looked terrible and his life might not be saved. She loved him as a friend, not as a boyfriend but seeing him like this made her cry...even after what she did to him.

[Bruce Norris]

Bruce was shocked at the state of Jack. He didn't expect him to be this bad.

[vampz march]

vampz then goes past the door on the way for operation on his arm and he sees jack and bows his head and swears an oath to jack "if jack dies i will try and find his killer and make such his killer dies "

[Miguel Rodrigez]

"Who was it?" Miguel asked, "one of us might know why he's tracking you guys down."

[vampz march]

ask bruce mate he is in there points to the door and vampz goes to sleep

[Miguel Rodrigez]

"Who was it Bruce?" he asked.